Writing & Research

After my presentation I feel like I am headed down the right path, because  I got the right feedback that I needed I feel.  I say this because before it seemed like in all of my main points Interest, Knowledge and Passion I brought up how he cares and is committed to his blog.  Some of my strengths were I feel like I am a great presenter and I already know what identity I have I just need to perfect my argument to support my thesis.