State of Essay Numero Dos

After the long, hard, painful process of writing my second essay I am pretty happy with what the final product is.  Although it is not as well written as my first one, I still feel that my essay was written very strong and creatively.  The reason why I say that it was not as strong as my first one is mainly because the options in the second essay didnt really fit to my strengths of writing.  As well as that I felt that it was very hard to use Wests framework to show how identity was expressed online.  In all actuality I believe that the reason it was so hard for me to write this essay compared to the other was because I wasn't motivated like I was on the other one. Either way from writing both of these essayI feel that I have become a much much stronger writer than I have been before writing these essays.